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John Clifford Primary & Nursery School ‘Be your best. Celebrate success. Together we will be successful.’

Lesson 4

WALT: Proofread and edit to improve checklist targets: sense/structure, layout, key word spelling, full stops and capital letters


Today we'd like you to edit the poem you composed in the last session. 


Read your poem out loud, does it make sense? Can you think of any better/more interesting words to improve your poem?

There is a checklist on the power point below to make sure your poem is the best it can be. Once you have edited your poem, can you publish it on some smart paper in your neatest handwriting?


We'd love to see it, please send us your completed work at