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John Clifford Primary & Nursery School ‘Be your best. Celebrate success. Together we will be successful.’

Step 2

Step 2

Depending on how long your plan takes, you may have time to start your writing. You will be writing one paragraph per box, using the ideas from your plan to help with your writing.

Start with the following sentence from the book and continue the story from there, like we did on Monday:


There were times, too, when Bull and Lucy gathered around a campfire with other tramps. 


Key things to remember:

  • Chronological order (don’t start writing about box 5 before box 3!)
  • Include how Edward is feeling at each point of the story
  • Detail and description – use all the exciting descriptive phrases from your plan, that’s what they’re there for! smiley


As always – capital letters, full stops, finger spaces and beautiful handwriting are important too!